Her Mechanical Heart
The noise churned from the subterranean depthsa low, agonized groan as of dying machinery. Something like a grind of melancholy gears, steel bones on wearied bellows: a clockwork heart attack.
The Woman rose.
She was old in the way of damask curtains, the color bleached and powdery, with the strength of wilting threads. Her face was an oak tree, gnarled to antiquity, crevassed beyond repair; her eyes were convex slate; her mouth, the slim aperture to an abyss. She was living dust.
Slowly, with bent back, the Woman hobbled across the room, her toes crackling like the last remnants of popcorn over a wintry fire. She limped through the basement door, down the darkened steps. She thought nothing, and made no sound.
There was void.
And beyond lay the furnace, a glowing ember in the non-light, bound by palls of detritus and the corpses of spiders. It was from this ironclad mass that the pitiful noise emanated, though growing fainter with each step that she took.
She paused, passive.
Creakingly, the Woman extended her fingers to feel about amongst the rods and wires and esoteric bits of scrap casking the metallic beast. There was no purpose in her movements, no hope that they should succeed in eliminating the noise, merely the blind gropings of a pale animal; a pig rooting for truffles in a wood without.
Then she stopped.
And withdrew her hand, clutching something small and red and slowly pulsing. The barest hint of confusion knotted her brow, only to be effaced by senility. The Woman accepted it as she accepted time and space and the clanking world about heras she would soon accept her own death.
The two-chambered little box continued to throb, though now quite irregularly, and softer than the patter of rain on fresh-tilled soil. And the ember-glow of the furnace began to retreat in upon itself, little impish coils lapping at the innards of a vast metallic carcass.
So it was that the last Woman watched the industrial pulse of the world beat out, while all about her the gears of the Earth ground to a shuddering halt, for she had long since forgotten what she was the Keeper of. But it did not matter. Nothing mattered.
For there was nothing left to matter, and no one to care. There was only a scrap of dying tin in a crinkled palm.







Devious Comments
Unbelievable work! Astounding, wonderful! BRAVO, author! Bravo!
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God bless,
JDT
Awww...I always thought humanity would go out with a bang, not with dying embers.
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The lion within, I roar
I stretch my bow, let arrow soar,
to protect your love.
But thats just my opinion. I do love your writings. And you are so very good with your descriptions.
The imagery accumulated throughout it till it was exploding with powerful kick butt meaning. ^-^
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Procrastination Makes Perfect
Story of my life
Now, I don't mean to be too nitpicky but you started five sentences with "and". I think the last two paragraphs don't need it; I believe it will read so much nicer without the "and"'s. Still, I absolutely love this it's just wonderful.
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Hehe - T.S. Eliot: "This is the way the world ends / Not with a bang but a whimper." I actually wasn't thinking of that at the time, but your comment reminded me; it seems that no matter what I do, I cannot escape some influence from that Eliot fellow.
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God bless,
JDT
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